You know how much I love that opener! I pray every night you'll find an agent for Hatshepsut--it's a FANTASTIC story, Stephanie! :-)
That's definitely a short and catchy line. It would get me to keep reading. Great opener.
Wow. Talk about creating compelling questions. I'm hooked - no suggestions here.
Yeah. this is a nice first line.
An attention grabber - best one I've seen so far!
I. LOVE. IT! I'm so hooked, lined and sinkered!
Leaves me with a pile of questions - that isn't a bad thing. Is this literal or figurative is the first question I want answered.Nice work and good luck :)
Intriguing! Nicely done.
I know I've read this line before and I still love it! Very well done.
It does make me want to read more...
This is a fabulous opening line. It has everything. Brava!
Love it! Nice work - would love to see more. Let me know if you'd like a new beta reader.Good luck!
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