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Tuesday, February 8, 2011

First Line Blogfest!



Brenda Drake's First Line Blogfest is going on now- there's over 125 entries! Here's mine!


My life began the night my father died.

12 comments:

Shannon O'Donnell said...

You know how much I love that opener! I pray every night you'll find an agent for Hatshepsut--it's a FANTASTIC story, Stephanie! :-)

Cheree said...

That's definitely a short and catchy line. It would get me to keep reading. Great opener.

Loralie Hall said...

Wow. Talk about creating compelling questions. I'm hooked - no suggestions here.

Tanya Reimer said...

Yeah. this is a nice first line.

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

An attention grabber - best one I've seen so far!

J.C. Martin said...

I. LOVE. IT! I'm so hooked, lined and sinkered!

Dustin said...

Leaves me with a pile of questions - that isn't a bad thing. Is this literal or figurative is the first question I want answered.

Nice work and good luck :)

Susan R. Mills said...

Intriguing! Nicely done.

J. L. Jackson said...

I know I've read this line before and I still love it! Very well done.

Aubrie said...

It does make me want to read more...

VR Barkowski said...

This is a fabulous opening line. It has everything. Brava!

Vicki Tremper said...

Love it! Nice work - would love to see more. Let me know if you'd like a new beta reader.

Good luck!